Introduction

Introduction

A Chapter by Xerclipse
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Do you see the secret message in this one? It's been bolded out.

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A man that darkness must fear

Let all demons and spirits scatter

Another dimension this one walks to

Never mentally stable!

 

Hell approaches him dangerously

Alcohol only fuels him everyday

Rage can be seen through his eyes

Killing is his only job

Isolated from humanity

Smile only triggered by violence

Oblivion awaits for him

Never mentally stable!


Proceed to the path of Epic Grim

To meet the path that goes dim

Travel with the Dark Exorcist

Through a journey that is full of twist



© 2012 Xerclipse


Author's Note

Xerclipse
So do you see the secret subject of this one? What do you think?

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It's always nice to use poems as a book introduction. I like to integrate them into my books, as well, to enhance the story-- I'm glad someone else does so too. Great intro.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

Thanks, and it is rare to see poetry and books go together like this. However the book is where the .. read more
Writer #00

7 Years Ago

Will do... was this meant to be a screenplay or comic before?
Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

a comic
saw the secret message alright. nice way to get ur audience and direct them to the book.
explanatory and succint. you hav just told us who aln is without qualms.
good

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

thanks.....and there is more to Alan when you read the book. But warning: Intricate plot and heavy v.. read more
I think I like this guy already Heh-heh. And yes, I really do like this poem, its kind of like a portrait poem I did for my character Eli, and it adequately describes him.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

Lol I will have to check that out soon.
Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

I added another part to this poem. What do you think of it?
RachelReaper

7 Years Ago

nice lines, I like the first two lines of the last stanza the best.
nice poem lol
not many ppl start off books with poetry

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

I added another part to this poem, what do you think of the new part?

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Hey people of Writer's cafe, what's up? You may call me Xerclipse and its about a year since I had this. I am 18 years old and I am at Mass Art right now! I write books with a lot of action and vio.. more..

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