Ghost Runner Volume 1

First thing first: Warning- Not for kiddies! You will know why.

My previous stories I found were too redundant and predictable. So right now I wanted to make a new story more deep. I will spend most of my free time thinking and crafting about this story! Now that I got accepted to colleges, I can now think freely.

After a long time out of Writer's Cafe I wanted to comeback with a story I have been thinking about. Give your best opinion (negative or positive and brute honesty) because I had writer's block for a long time. Plus I wanted to get out of that script writing and finally become a real writer. Doesn't mean I wont keep my style but I would transfer it to my new story.

Proceed if you wish. If you do, I just want to let you know I love hearing criticism and great reviews. So do your best if you want to give me your opinion based on the story. Also ask me questions.