Laws for Acrisius

Laws for Acrisius

A Chapter by Xerclipse
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Standard rules that you must follow if you are a subordinate for Acrisius

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Laws for the
Greater Good of 
Acrisius

1. Any citizen or subordinate of Acrisius may not roam around helpless or homeless. The streets must be clean from all who are bring filth and so forth.

2. No subordinate has any access to the main Tower. Only Hangmen and your leader Carnegie Spree may leave and enter by their own will.

3. Committing Theft is an immediate result of death by Hangman.

4. Possessing any knowledge that is not published or given to the public domain is an immediate result of death by Hangman.

5. Possessing any blueprint, image or media of a Hangman is strictly prohibited, and will result in death.

6. Dodging surveillance is strictly prohibited.

7. When a target for the Hangman disappears, the word of that subordinate shall not be spoken. 

Any violation of these laws will result in death by Hangman.

Exclusive Hangman rule: Any target that is a young female must be brought back to Carnegie Spree without any form of mutilation or disfigurement.


© 2013 Xerclipse


Author's Note

Xerclipse
I am sorry for not posting this before the story began. But here are the laws. So be a good subordinate for Acrisius.

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I wonder why young females have to go to him? this seems like its gonna get creepy lol

Posted 7 Years Ago


Yikes! Even without your summary, I can tell Acrisius is both a very harsh society (laws 3, 4, 5), a place that seems to adhere to many principles of social Darwinism (law 1), and that they are clearly hiding something from the general public (laws 2, 4, 5, 6 and 7) *shudder* Sounds like a scary place to live.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this chapter a lot. Give strength and purpose to the chapter. In a control society. Freedom is lost and control of mind and life is necessary. I like the laws. Thank you for sharing the excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

there is so much more to expect than these laws. Of course you have more restrictions than listed
Interesting start. Gonna continue to read. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hmm.... interesting. The rules are very archaic absolutist/ puppet-governmenty...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Man, that Hangman dude is going to be a busy guy. I hope he has lots of help. It is human nature (if the beings in your story are, indeed, humans) to want to test the laws and break the rules from time to time. Better not do that sort of thing in Acrisius. If you get caught, I'll guarantee you that you won't do it again. Well, unless you're a beautiful and voluptuous young woman. Then, maybe you got a shot...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

most of them are human, they just travel through the different dimension called the underworld. The .. read more
I like it! Sounds like a pretty harsh regime. That's a really good idea to write down the set of laws; I'll have to try that some time.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

Oh by the way (Im sorry if this makes you uncomfortable or awkward) but there is a rule for only Han.. read more
Jayde Of Ariston

7 Years Ago

Hahah Carnegie Spree sound like a man of priorities xD
Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

yeah he is the leader of Acrisius
I guess if I don't follow the rules I can see death in my near future. Lol

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Xerclipse

7 Years Ago

Yup, but you get to be dragged into the underworld once for your life then shot, stabbed, or dismemb.. read more

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Hey people of Writer's cafe, what's up? You may call me Xerclipse and its about a year since I had this. I am 18 years old and I am at Mass Art right now! I write books with a lot of action and vio.. more..

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