Between Smiles and Words

Just another poem, it makes my world go around.

 

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Your mouth,

The beginning and the end

Of everything

Of kisses, that last a lifetime

Of solace in

The pouring out of words

An endless union

Of our psychologies,

Gifted with the

Excellence of lips

Decorating the joy

In our reciprocating faces,

It’s the bottom line

Of the communication

Between us, a lilac blur

Of heart-soaked moments,

Colliding into the flesh

Of this world’s fragile synastries,

We navigate each other’s faces,

As complex as music

Flowing with emotions,

Alive with melodies

That I can’t bear

To leave them go unnoticed –

Your mouth,

The start of eloquence,

Inspiring the lines

I am about to proclaim;

A sequence of gender

Interaction, upon the brink

Between smiles and words.

Reviews

[Markymark]

This piece is convoluted....It doesn't follow a pattern of seeable metaphor or simile.

A lilac blur of heart-soaked moments?

An endless union of our psychologies? Seems forced and wordy without true substance.

Great job though.

[Wildecat]

This is a well crafted poem, a total pleasure to read your poetry.