The Best Of Me

So I wrote this a while ago! It started out being about my ex and then it sort evolved into I don't even know! Ohh well haha! Anyways the hidden message is: I became good for you <3

The Best Of Me

I hear tree branches break,

And the whole ground shakes,

That's how I know you're near,

It's like your very existence,

Is making the world do some crazy things,

And everybody runs with fear,

When you spit the words in their face,

And you have hurt me for the last time,

Won't let you rain on my parade,

I gotta end this today

Your whole body's evil,

In your heart and in your soul,

And I'm scared to death because,

Everyone would like to know,

Just who you are,

And just what you've done,

But most of all I'd like to know,

What you'd like to do with me,

So that I am prepared,

For when you get the best of me

And now I'm left stranded,

Alone in this mysterious forest,

But with each step I take,

I feel you getting two steps closer,

Closer and closer to our fate,

Well now I'm running for my life,

Cuz my fate with you,

Would end up turning deadly,

I breathe in my last breath,

When I turn around and see your face

You whole body's evil,

In your heart and in your soul,

And I'm scared to death because,

Everyone would like to know,

Just who you are,

And just what you've done,

But most of all I'd like to know,

What you'd like to do with me,

So that I am prepared,

For when you get the best of me

You can see the fright in my eyes,

When you grab ahold of me,

But when I break away,

You stand still in your place,

I can see the sorrow in your eyes,

And you look up at me and say

I'm trying to make my whole body good,

In my heart and in my soul,

But I'm scared to death because,

Everyone would like to know,

Just who I used to be,

And what I've done before I changed,

But I'd just like you to know,

That I'll never hurt you,

So that you are prepared,

For when you get the best of me <3

Author's Note

So this originally started out as a song about my ex. I wrote the chorus when I was really mad at him for something, but then as I was writing the verse's I was like... this doesn't really fit. After that it kind of turned into a story about how when the boy finally gets ahold of her, she learns that he's trying to change. It's about a boy who made bad mistakes in the past and got a bad reputation for it, but now he's trying to change his way's for this girl :) Anyways haha! I hope you like it! It's not one of my favorites but hopefully no one hates it haha! Feel free to comment and review!

Reviews

[Panda11598]

Okay so before I say anything I giggled at this part:
"And the whole ground shakes
That's how I know you're near"
Haha when I read that I thought about him if you know what I mean ;) MMkay now I just finished reading it and it's really good :) I like it!

[Krista Weiss]

Bahaha I know right! That's my favorite part :P cuz ya I started writing it about him and I started writing the first verse and I started like hysterically laughing on the bus cuz it made so much sense! Lol :) but ya haha thanks :))))

[MandaBear]

Your whole body's evil,
In your heart and in your soul,
And I'm scared to death because,
Everyone would like to know,
Just who you are,
And just what you've done,
But most of all I'd like to know,
What you'd like to do with me,
So that I am prepared,
For when you get the best of me

Loved that part!!

[Krista Weiss]

Aww thanks! :)

[B-poet]

I love the piercing vocubulary along with deepth behind the overall meaning of this poem. Endearing, eloquent, and the raw emotional message is set up very well. Great work. :)

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks!!! Glad you like it! :)))

[Lydia]

I actually really like thus one. Especially the chorus!

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks! :) Glad you like it!

[BIIKAY]

this is neat!!it sent chills down my spine!! :))

[Krista Weiss]

Thanks :)