This Moment

This Moment

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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While I was on vacation down the shore I started writing this song! I hope you like it! :) The hidden message is: I dreamed I would see you <3

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This Moment
Waves crash, wind blows,
Walking down the beach,
Side by side,
And praying that you'll,
Never let go, of my hand,
This moment could never feel,
More unreal,
Cuz it's so unreal to see,
You walking next to me,
I just can't believe it baby
I've been waiting for this moment,
And watching for this moment,
And praying for this moment,
All my life,
I've been waiting for your hand,
To be entwined in mine,
For the longest time,
I can't believe this is happening,
Cuz I've been waiting for this moment
I can't stop looking into your eyes,
Cuz I've been waiting for this time,
When I know you love me too,
And your eyes are the,
Perfect shade of blue,
Just like ocean,
That flows around our feet,
Baby don't let go of me,
Cuz I can't let this moment slip,
Away and flow free
I've been waiting for this moment,
And watching for this moment,
And praying for this moment,
All my life,
I've been waiting for your hand,
To be entwined in mine,
For the longest time,
I can't believe this is happening,
Cuz I've been waiting for this moment
Baby don't go,
Oh baby please don't go,
Cuz I need you right here,
With your arm on my shoulder,
Cuz that's where it's meant to be,
So baby please don't go,
Cuz baby you'll never know
I've been waiting for this moment,
And watching for this moment,
And praying for this moment,
All my life,
I've been waiting for your lips,
To be up against mine,
For the longest time,
I can't believe this is happening,
Cuz I've been waiting for this moment <3

© 2012 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
While I was on vacation in Wildwood, NJ this year I kept dreaming that I would somehow magically run into my crush. Before school ended he told me that his family was going there on vacation too but he never told me when. Everyday, I kept imaging different situations where I would see him somewhere and we would get to spend the whole day together! When I was walking on the beach that night with my family I couldn't stop thinking about how perfect it would be if he was there with me so I wrote this song about it! I hope you like it!! :)

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That's very sweet! Typical boys - being all mysterious and not letting you know when! I know how that feels. I think this would be a great song and such a lovely choice of lyrics too!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Krista Weiss

8 Years Ago

Aww!! Thank you!! :)
Persona

8 Years Ago

You're welcome. "Perfect shade of blue" was the best bit - I like hints as to what the boy may look .. read more
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This is an awesome write. I am a Jersey boy, and I just wanted to tell you this was a great write. Sadly, the hurricane destroyed a lot of these areas, including my town. :(

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Krista Weiss

8 Years Ago

Thank you!! :) I'm a jersey girl!! And ya the hurricane stunk :( Sorry about your town!! :(
I think you are giving Taylor swift a run for her money very good

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Krista Weiss

8 Years Ago

Thanks :) haha
Omigosh this is adorable :) Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

8 Years Ago

thankssssss :) haha
I like the flow of this. It would sound amazing on acoustic.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Krista Weiss

8 Years Ago

Thanks!! And hopefully I'll be able to make chords for it soon :)

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