Nothing At All

Nothing At All

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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This is a song I wrote where I talk about what I want my love to be like. The hidden message is: I'd be a nobody without you <3

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Nothing At All
You see me walking down our street,
In my old skinny jeans,
Listenin' to Chris Young on repeat,
I'm just an ordinary girl,
Living in an ordinary world,
With a perfect guy just minutes down the street,
I never would've seen, never would've dreamed,
That he would fall for me, which was what it seemed,
Yet I never would've knew,
That my dreams would come true,
Till that day he said to me

Hey baby did you know I love you?
I can't believe it either, I just know it's true,
Now that I admit it,
Could you admit you love me too?
You're the girl of my dreams,
I could be your prince charming,
Please come to me,
I need you to breathe,
Cuz I know without you next to me,
I'd be nothing at all

The pieces were all falling together,
You said you loved me more than ever,
Ooh the way you shined,
You were mine,
I was yours,
And this love was ours,
Now I think back to that day,
When everything had gone the right way,
I am so grateful now,
And I remember how you said

Hey baby did you know I love you?
I can't believe it either, I just know it's true,
Now that I admit it,
Could you admit you love me too?
You're the girl of my dreams,
I could be your prince charming,
Please come to me, 
I need you to breathe,
Cuz I know without you next to me,
I'd be nothing at all

For some reason now,
Everything is going down,
Nothing seems like it used to be,
And you won't even look at me,
I don't know how it got this far,
But it needs to end,
When you walk by me and turn your head,
I grab your hand, and I say to you

Hey baby did you know I love you?
I can't believe it either, I just know it's true,
Now that I admit it,
Could you admit you love me too?
You're the boy of my dreams,
Could you be my prince charming?
Please stay here with me,
I need you to breathe,
Cuz I know without you next to me,
I'd be nothing at all <3

© 2013 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
Hope you guys like it <3 fell free to comment and review :)

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I feel the same way about the guy across the street from me lol except we are not together but one of these I hope! Great write! Keep it up!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

6 Years Ago

It's exactly what I want a relationship to be even though it hasn't happened for me either! :P I'm g.. read more
this is so ridiculously adorable...had me grinning from ear to ear. I will say it once again, you are a wonderful song writer, my friend. Keep at it, we may have a future grammy winner here :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

6 Years Ago

Hahahaha aww :) thanks!!! :P
Aw, so perfect!!!:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

6 Years Ago

Haha thanks!! :)
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6 Years Ago

:)
So cute! When I read the part about Chris Young I was like AHH lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

6 Years Ago

I know I just had to put that in there when I re wrote it! :P
beautiful... :)
amazing re-use of the phrase..light language..and im sure you felt great after penning it down..good work..keep it up :)...
can be a light relaxing song..and also a deep lyric'd one..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

7 Years Ago

Thank you!! :)
I really enjoyed this, probably my favourite poem. I liked how you used repetition and I think you could truly be a poet for a career.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This would be a great song if you could find music to go with it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem! It shows you that you are really a poet!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it


Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on April 6, 2012
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Krista Weiss
Krista Weiss

Blairstown, NJ



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I love to write music and that's my reason for joining this website. My inspiration is Taylor Swift. She's inspired me to get through all of the rough patches in my life and to get over them by writin.. more..

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