What's Wrong

This is a song I wrote about a guy I've like for forever who's never really liked me... I hope you all like it! :) The hidden message of the song is: There is no hope for you and me <3

What's Wrong

Since the first day I saw you,

You never knew I was there,

I was just that girl,

That loved you when I was young,

You had so many girls,

Screaming out your name,
While I was watching quietly,

Wondering if you even knew my name

One day he's giving me butterflies,

And the next day he's gone,

He went right back to her,

While my arms were wide open,

Waiting and praying,

For him to come along,

And now he see's sorrow in my eyes,

But he can't tell what's wrong

He looks right past me,

Like I'm a piece of glass,

He goes right through me,

To get to her,

And he walks right past,

Like I was never there,

But can't he see,

Me feeling him breathe

One day he's giving me butterflies,

And the next day he's gone,

He went right back to her,

While my arms were wide open,

Waiting and praying,

For him to come along,

And now he see's sorrow in my eyes,

But he can't tell what's wrong

Well I thought we had a chance,

And chance to make this right,

And what's right is me,

Wrapped up in your arms,

While she goes and finds a new man,

To not treat as well as he's worth

One day he's giving me butterflies,

And the next day he's gone,

He went right back to her,

While my arms were wide open,

Waiting and praying,

For him to come along,

And now he see's sorrow in my eyes,

But he can't tell what's wrong

Honey, I can't even have you,

And baby, that's what's wrong <3

Author's Note

Heyy everyone :) so I hope you like the song <3 It's basically about this guy that I've liked for about 10 years and let me remind you that at this moment I'm 13 soooo ya it's been a while haha.. either way I've liked him for a really long time but he's always kinda just hated me. It sucks but I'm used to it by now. Anyways, for some reason he always seems to go for the girls that treat him like crap while I'm kinda standing off on the side feeling invisible. The song's basically about me being completely invisible when I'm around him while the girl he's with doesn't treat him as the amazing person he is and all I want to do it that <3 Hope you guys like the song :) If you guys read this whole note thanks :P cuz it feels like incredibly long haha :)

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Awww, i'm so sorry, i've read the amazing song you've written for him before ! That sux, girl, but you will make it through :) I know how you feel, it happens all the time with me xD You love Taylor Swift, right? Well, i can see she inspired you:
"He looks right past me,
Like I'm a piece of glass,
He goes right through me,
To get to her,
And he walks right past,
Like I was never there,
But can't he see,
Me feeling him breathe"
It makes me think of Taylor's teardrops on my guitar clip, when Drew walks through her to go to his girlfriend.
Ah and yes, i've read all your author's note xD