Salvation

Salvation

A Poem by Kruppz
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Wanting challenges to end

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Longs for the Love
That comes from Above
Enough of tests
I want some rest
I am only human
Fighting for herself
But i want some rest
I want some rest,
Solace, Grace and Embrace
Used all my patience
and from this race
that I'm running alone
I want Salvation

© 2019 Kruppz


Author's Note

Kruppz
Open to suggestions. Please help with punctuation. What does this poem mean to you?

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Life can be full of challenges, and too many can certainly dampen the spirits. I can understand the need for some rest, some peace and quiet. A time to be still. A universal theme I think we have here Kruppz. Your final lines suggested that you have had more than enough.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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When will struggling pay off? That's what this meant to me. Which is something everyone wonders, don't they. But struggling is swimming, the fact that you can show it has paid off. Wonderful write!

Posted 11 Months Ago


The sad desperation of the protagonist comes out strongly in this through the word choice and repitition. It is an emotional rhyming piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I would encourage you to be strong and know that better times would come. The Creator of Heaven and Earth created you for a wonderful and loving purpose. And the whole universe is incomplete without your input. Keep writing and inspiring others.
I wish you success in your dreams for Hollywood and Bollywood.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kruppz

2 Years Ago

Thanks BlackPrince for your kind and encouraging words.
Life can be full of challenges, and too many can certainly dampen the spirits. I can understand the need for some rest, some peace and quiet. A time to be still. A universal theme I think we have here Kruppz. Your final lines suggested that you have had more than enough.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 5, 2019
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Tags: challenges, tests, rest, human, solace, patience, God

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Kruppz
Kruppz

India



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