The unforeseen withdrawal

The unforeseen withdrawal

A Poem by Kruppz
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about a girl-friend I still admire...

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That slim, confident figure

Her feminine, stunning features,

Stressed as if mockingly by her loose dress.

 

Yesterday’s bright-eyed dreamer

Today’s beloved, a life-loving learner,

Tomorrow’s risk-analyst, a to-be alpha woman.

 

Forever I thought I could cherish lady beautiful, eternally

But the day I saw that subtle hint in her eyes, so green…

© 2011 Kruppz


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A gender play of familiarity between mates that leaves much that is deemed non-verbal and in the process, it loses its audience. Curious!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This awesome critiques review is :-

A lovely intelligent write...such creativity with words used to create sublime poem...after one read one feels one has learnt something profound...

5/5



Posted 9 Years Ago


Very adorable write.
I loved the way the poem was expressed in.
the expressions were well defined and well understood.
It goes a little over head at first read.... but a second time recitation and it comes beautifully to you.
Great job!


Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on November 25, 2011
Last Updated on November 25, 2011
Tags: benign envy, admiration, love, life

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Kruppz
Kruppz

India



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