I Love You

I Love You

A Poem by ksscampos

A flower can be found in great ruins

I Love You

I Love You

The answer to the conflicts of the world
Ever so powerful, these words be told
This feeling inside burns through the skin
Come hold my hand, you are my queen

To my darkness you bring light
My world you make shine bright
Time goes by unknown
This love is set in stone

Tomorrow is long hours away
In my arms I beg you to stay
There will be a day I fail to tell
My love is true, it will continue

Fear not other troubles
I will protect you from all the rubbles
I’ll soon make you my wife
I will love you until the end of life

© 2014 ksscampos

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This is sweet. :) I liked your flow and you RHYMED!!!! I have always struggled to rhyme, so I think its amazing when someone else does it! ^.^

Wonderful write. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

trust me! I struggle with rhymes also... I personally think the rhymes are no SO important, but the .. read more

8 Years Ago

You can't suck... Look at your poem!!! :)

Anywho. Your'e welcome.
so good & the tone is so desperate, i love it

Posted 8 Years Ago

>.> Seriously.. Jeebus man.. I swear...

Posted 8 Years Ago

amazing poem i liked it keep up the good work

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


8 Years Ago

Thank you... im glad you enjoyed
jennifer little

8 Years Ago

your welcome

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Added on October 24, 2014
Last Updated on October 24, 2014



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