My Dream

My Dream

A Poem by ksscampos

My Dream

“Dad! Look at what I’ve done.”
His tiny arms extended out to my direction 
Supplying me with sketch. 
It did not look sophisticated
But I could tell he did his best.

“Do you like it Dad? It’s you and Mom.”
My eyes glanced but could not see
A blurred sun with a blue sky
Two stick figures were outlined

I looked at him but his face was turned
He wore a cap, his hair was short
It all looked familiar, like déjà vu
Son, this is the first time I meet you

All of a sudden it came to me 
The blurred images were just a dream
I pictured a perfect life
I had a son, I had a wife

Reality is obscure
My dreams the images are so pure
I want to sleep and not wake up
I wish this existence 
Just cease to be

© 2014 ksscampos


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Very good, there is much feeling in it, love and sorrow. Well done. I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


ksscampos

5 Years Ago

Thank you. That means a lot coming from you.
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

5 Years Ago

My pleasure. :)

Rudi
╰☆╮We all want that happy ending. Great work.╰☆╮

Posted 5 Years Ago


The loss of this poor soul goes deep, I truly hope he wakes from his sleep. Job well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


wow, i can assume this is about a man who lost his family, it is a tugger at the heartstrings

Posted 5 Years Ago


My friend wordman brought me here and first thanks goes to him, for introducing me to talented fellow writer...this was deep and interesting!

Will be back to read more of your work, all the best in the world if writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


ksscampos

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much.. it really means a lot to me.
A. Amos

5 Years Ago

You're most welcome!
Very nice, I saw it the right opposite of wordman below. I thought that it showed the ache the writer had to fast forward to the bliss ahead. There's something worth looking forward to so badly that he just feels like he simply cannot wait. I feel a picket fence lines the yard in the future. :) If you just close your eyes you might catch glimpse. Lovely.

Posted 5 Years Ago


ksscampos

5 Years Ago

Thank you Nikki.. and its true, i feel if i had continued writing a picket fence would've come to pl.. read more
Nikki

5 Years Ago

lol :) You're welcome. Glad to hear it, I'll just plug it into my imagination for this gentleman any.. read more
a sad write filled with dim views of life and disappointment

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

well you are a writer poetry sites sometime get lonely but if you comment on a poem a day you will g.. read more
ksscampos

5 Years Ago

Very true.. my family and friends doesn't know i write poetry, so my only audience is here.
 wordman

5 Years Ago

poetry is a great outlet for emotions we hide from others and sometimes from our selves send aamos.. read more

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Added on October 26, 2014
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ksscampos

boca raton, FL



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