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You Stupid Idiot

You Stupid Idiot

A Poem by The fallen of innocence
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A twisted love poem for a boy I'm hopelessly in love with yet I wish to hurt

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You call me annoying, a b***h..............HA!!!!!!


Your words are nothing to me, I don't care what you say


What's wrong, a little shocked,


Cause just a few weeks ago I confessed that I love you......


Such a f*****g idiot


Don't try to drift awry, and think I'm easy to fool


I know your trick, so you can lure me into a trap


That I'll always regret.


I rather tear your heart to shreds


Than see us together and fall apart.


First, we fought and cussed each other out


Then we kindly spoke to one another.


I know why you hate me now, and my actions are the reason.


It was just as I planned, there's no stopping me now.


Not when I'm about to finish what I started.


Don't act like you don't know, that's the reason I don't want to be with you.


And don't be pissed off when you know I say the truth


That you're a f*****g idiot!!!!!!!!!


*tears in my eyes* ..........................................


Why don't you prove that you're not an idiot


And notice that I f*****g love you


But that I'm too afraid to let anyone see what I really feel about you.


That's why I lie, I trick, and torture your mind.


I love the way you react, because it keeps you from knowing how I really feel


It's a blessing and a curse for me, but I love to feel the hurt.


Why can't you see through this trick


You stupid idiot.............................

© 2011 The fallen of innocence


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great job and if its for riku (or i think thats the nickname you told me) i know how you felt when you wrote this master piece. you loved the guy but he was to blind to see how you really felt. to ignorant to know you were there. i should know cause me and you both had it happen to us this year. you with riku, and me with zane.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I feel the surge of one trying to hide a feeling of love by acting as though it wouldnt bother them to be rejected. That kind of feeling is so painful, so emotional, so piercing through the heart. You penned these emotions brilliantly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


ranting i like it, very strong with so much emotion, good job with this

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well?...I have to say this is one of the realist poems Ihave read.it's kind of dark but i like dark.Don't change a thing,I love it!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great job and if its for riku (or i think thats the nickname you told me) i know how you felt when you wrote this master piece. you loved the guy but he was to blind to see how you really felt. to ignorant to know you were there. i should know cause me and you both had it happen to us this year. you with riku, and me with zane.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yeh ! you stupid idiot i know! this poem i can tell it to this guy tht i met but nice write ! i know how this feels like well kinda but nice poem !:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


angst much..lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a great poem, with a lot of emotion packed into it! I love your expressions of anger and darkness through your writing...I'm all for that = ] Great work!

-Brittany

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow very powerful! Good job!(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW, this was so powerful, profound, and poignant. This was a great poem to read, I loved every stanza. I had to read it twice, because it was so good. Great poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The fallen of innocence
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I'm a girl that likes to write, read, and listen to music. Poetry is my most favorite type of writing. I also love anime, my poetry is also on deviant art. I don't care if im different, I'm myself. I .. more..

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