Giving up

Giving up

A Poem by Angela
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Short yet... Sweet?

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Mercy,
grip my shoulders,
push me under,
and let me drown...

© 2012 Angela


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Angela
Tell me what you think, I want to know. Good and bad. What do I need to work on?

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This is really short, but it still packs a punch. Very intense too. Kudos

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Angela

9 Years Ago

Thank you. That is what I was trying to do. (:
The Watcher

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome =)
Super short, but I kinda like that. It makes the piece so much more effective.
So my vote is for 'Good'. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angela

9 Years Ago

Thank you. ♥

9 Years Ago

You're welcome :)

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Added on July 24, 2012
Last Updated on November 3, 2012
Tags: Mercy, jolt, short

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Angela
Angela

Crafton, PA



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BIO Name: Angela Age: 14 Zodiac Sign: Sagittarius Eye Color: Brown Hair Color: Brown Hometown: Seattle Current Residence: Pennsylvania I love to write poetry and a few dabbles every so often.. more..

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