Woman inside

Woman inside

 

The woman inside the skin of his head

Picks up those stones they have thrown and builds a

Rock garden amid the mess of days, nights

And life.

The curious world peeps through the open

Windows he never minds to shut. The light

Showers a mood he so much cares to have.

Ah light!

Light whitens the black and bleak decors of

Rooms and chores. The days of rain and lonely

Porch, wet.

Wet sleepless miles in the conflict’s terrain

What want he yields to and what love he does

Believe!

 The woman inside the skin of his head

Creates a world of thousand blooms, cries rivers

And loves.

 

 

Reviews

[lori c]

this has to be one of my favorites that you've shared with me. the imagery is so clear and vivid. i love that she builds a rock garden... creating something beautiful out of the ugliness, perhaps ? he doesn't care that the world knows how he is feeling. truly this woman has in some way possessed the essence of the man. fantastic.

[Emily B]

loveliness in the form of a rock garden. . .

[Laughing Lunatic]

Wow! So beautiful and detailed and vivid I love it!! =)

[Cece]

amazing i want to say deep
but that is always saying
i dont understand and
means i need more learning

it is well put together
i know the woman
changes a man
how he thinks

he thinks of soft things
that once wasnt there
flowers that he never
thought of before

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

very descriptive, with great imagery. nicely done, wonderfully written.

[Kasey Klein]

Nicely done, my friend

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"The woman inside the skin of his head
Creates a world of thousand blooms, cries rivers
And loves."- This is such a deep write!
Very beautifully written and full of remorse feel... I loved the description and imagery..
A very vivid write!

[Alexzan Marie]

Wow...so beautiful and detailed and vivid... It does create many thought provoking theories and much wonderment about whom or what was the inspiration.
Absolutely wonderful....

I am adding this to my reading list.

[justjenn_2u]

How deep and intricate! I love the descriptive word choice. Your word power just amazes me here! Good job!

[waywithwords]

Kushal my friend written with wonderful imagery and wonderment of a woman's words and actions. Beautiful my friend. Annexxx