Motion (Rework #1)

Motion (Rework #1)

A Poem by Kyle J. Lawson
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A rework of my original song "Motion".

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With the stream of minds, it flows
Swimming towards the diamonds in, the shallows

The Earth shakes beneath
Rattling glass bones
Gusts of wind, enticing moods
Cold but not alone

Subtle  whispers
Soft words in the mind

A trickle of water 
Drops into the ocean
All the lost are found
In a churning motion

Carried by the sunlight, finding a way through
Breach the gleaming surface, body renewed

The Earth trembles violently
Rattling glass bones
A gale of wind, stricken down
Still cold but not alone

Subtle whispers
Resonating in time

A trickle of water
Drops into the ocean
All the lost found
In a churning motion
Motion...
Motion...

{Bridge}
Subtle whispers
Soft words in the mind

Subtle whispers
Resonating in time

{Outro Chorus}
A trickle of water
Drops into the ocean
All the lost are found
In a churning motion

All lost are found
In a churning motion
A trickle of water
Drops into the ocean
Ocean...
Ocean...

© 2013 Kyle J. Lawson


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Kyle J. Lawson
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Added on July 18, 2013
Last Updated on July 18, 2013
Tags: Internal struggle, turmoil, pain, the mind, rock, hard rock, alternative rock, progressive rock, abstract

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Kyle J. Lawson
Kyle J. Lawson

Greenwood, IN



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Greetings everyone, I'm Kyle. I've recently gotten into writing within the past three years and love doing it. I'm always looking for ways to improve, since I'm nowhere near good or great in any shape.. more..

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