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Just the opening logline. Scrolling text like Star Wars. Also will be on the book flap or the back.

In a world after humans,
where animals have evolved to rule in our image;
a group of freedom fighters vie for
separation from the tyrannical TRIUMVIRATE.

This REBELLION, aloft in the heavens with
numerous other kin, call the TOWERS their home,
majestic wonders built millions of years
ago, before the humans' extinction.

Punishing any form of disobedience with
a painful and humiliating death �" The Triumvirate
maintains a steadfast societal dominance. In a desperate attempt
to gain the upper hand, the rebels have employed the services of VALESSA, a young
vulpine spy �" skilled in the art of extracting information.

Sending her to The Triumvirate's Amphitheatre, the minuscule
chance of attaining key intelligence is all that stands in the way
between freedom and enslavement for all...

Author's Note

Whatever you have to say will help immensely.

Reviews

[gaskinml]

Kyle... What do you mean in our image? The first thing that comes into my mind is that the Christian religion believes that humans were created in the image and likeness of God. So... How does evolve and image come into play? I think I'm missing something here...... OR, do you mean image in that humanity is ruling animals and now we are the one being ruled?

Apologize up front if I am off base.... love the style a lot and frankly its pretty neat.

[Kyle Lambert]

I definitely did want to invoke religious imagery.
I agree that it would make more sense to say "rule in our stead".
But I really do want to keep the religious imagery, I thought that I could use the word 'image' as the image and form of our society and body shape.

[gaskinml]

Got it.... Did humanity play a part at all in your overall story? Was there some sort of event that allowed animals to quickly evolve? Was that caused by humans? I ask this because I naturally link a CREATED being with the item that the image is on.

BUT, I'm not reading as well as I should because you answered it in the last paragraph above. I see, societal make-up...make sense. That does require me as a religious person to look at the word image a bit differently.....

[Kyle Lambert]

I'll say that the scars of humanity and the reason we died out as a species still haunts the current inhabitants. Maybe it's nuclear war making the surface uninhabitable, etc... I choose to leave that up to interpretation to the reader while dropping little hints here and where.
Because as a species we have so many flaws that when someone hears about our demise almost each person will have a different theory for why we are going to die out.

[easybreezy]

I like the idea. It's hard to tell exactly where you are going with this due to the shortness of it, but I'm definitely interested!

[The Rhino]

This looks like fun! Where are you going with it? Is this just a teaser? I would like to know how the animals evolved and are there still humans. Can you tell I am a sci-fi geek?

[Dante Hieroden]

Colorful imagery conjures up in my mind as I read this. Its a good start and I'm looking forward to reading more. ^ ^

[Stacey Watts]

This so far sounds really good. I usually write romance novels but, I would like to keep reading this. It sounds as though it might be intriguing. I am not sure what a Triumvirate is you might could explain that in your notes.

[Kyle Lambert]

Sure thing! But it actually becomes pretty apparent as you read the actual novel.
It's the name for a leadership comprised of three people.

[Stacey Watts]

Okay thanks for the clarification. Most things are more clearer when you read. I will keep reading when you post.