She's no longer a little girl

When she was born

you could tell

she was an angel

 

When she was a todler

she was still

that same angel

 

She began to go older

on into her teens

everyone hope she was still that angel

 

She got into high school

became a cheerleader

and became a b***h

 

She started making friends

with the wrong kind of people

they pressed her into drugs

 

She drank and drove

she pumped drugs into her system

she became addicted

 

Her mother cried

her father yelled

and she just sat there and laughed

 

They kicked her out

she lived on the streets

she became a hooker

 

She had client after client

making money like crazy

until one day when she feel in love

 

He swept her off her feet

she feel head over heels

they decided to get married

 

They set the date

she got the dress

they were happily married

 

She won't a kid

they tried and tried

but she couldn't

 

She went to the doctor

when she was a hooker

she got aids

 

Now she's unable to have a baby

she cries and cries

she hate's her life

 

She goes through pictures

looking back at her old friends

wishing she would have changed

 

She call's her parents

telling them she's so sorry

but they won't listen

 

She cries to her husband

he holds her tight

they sit there in slience

 

They want a baby so bad

they'd do anything

give up anything

 

One day

she felt weird

and went to the doctor

 

She was pergnant

she cried tears of joy

she called her husband

 

He rushed home

they were both crying

they were so happy

 

She hoped and prayed

that her child

wouldn't be like her

 

She was a good little girl

who became a w***e

but now she can live happy

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very powerful tale in the poem. Can be many things in a life. I like the flow of the story and the ending. All parent have dreams their child will have a good life. No perfect people. Just kind people willing to accept and forgive. I like the strong ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Aehr]

I like the journey and the tale of the girl. Well written.

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Muhammad Qasim]

Everything has a reason for it taking place and everything teaches a lesson, those who learn and don't repeat them will be the ones to livr happily, love the story for every sin can be atone for and every experience tells a tale!!

[SouthernBelle]

thanks

[unknown]

..... This was a beautiful poem. I loved this! >_< You did such a great job with it, and it is something that I loved, and just felt the biggest amount of joy when she found out she was pregnant. I almost cheered in the middle of doing laundry. :)

Great job!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[SJ]

This is just WOW! I loved the whole poem with a story to tell, which was brief, concise and to the point. Every word, every verse just gets right at you, and not once does the poem or theme lose focus or go off on a tangent. Excellent writing!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you :)

[SouthernBelle]

It tells a story. I loved it so much. Thank you for sharing!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[amarlaksh]

great imagery great write.keep writing

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Heather]

very emotional words
such imagery
powerful work! good job :)

[SouthernBelle]

thank you