Part 2- The Story of them

Part 2- The Story of them

A Story by SouthernBelle

As they watched their parents

be buried dead

they cried and cried

 

They were taken away

to Andrew's house of Hopes

for children

 

They wasted time day after day

waiting for someone to take them

to a better home

 

They bounced from house to house

no one wanted them

just looking for an excuse to leave

 

They grew up

finally moved out

on their own

 

They went to Rebecca's institute of Girl's Socity

and her brother's left in the cold

left to die

 

He found a school

Tibbe Tech

and went and graduated

 

He got his degree for

Nuro-Surgen

and became rich

 

His sister became a

Stripper

and became somewhat rich.

 

They both found love

got married

and had children

 

Now their living

happy ever after

© 2012 SouthernBelle


Author's Note

SouthernBelle
This is part two to She's in love with the boy

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Thanks for sharing. True story?

Posted 11 Years Ago


SouthernBelle

11 Years Ago

no lol the first part is about people in my class and this is just a second part lol
Levi Levin

11 Years Ago

Thanks
yes! this is fantastic to carry on the story, thank you for writing a part 2. I enjoyed both pieces :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SouthernBelle

11 Years Ago

thank you
ℰmerald ⚓

11 Years Ago

your very welcome
Nice read

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SouthernBelle

11 Years Ago

thanks
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Tex
Wow you have packed two full lives in one short write! amazing. I liked this story. Almost a poem or at lease prose like. very nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SouthernBelle

11 Years Ago

thank you
Very interesting, I enjoyed the way you told this story. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SouthernBelle

11 Years Ago

thank you
aw speechless

Posted 11 Years Ago


SouthernBelle

11 Years Ago

good
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

;-)
SouthernBelle

11 Years Ago

:)
Sometime a hard life make you stronger. I was tossed around in foster homes. Made me appreciate my home and family. I like the story. A positive ending in a way. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


SouthernBelle

11 Years Ago

thank you
Tragic, but the flower seems to grow out of the ice... A happy ending in this one. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SouthernBelle

11 Years Ago

ur welcome thanks for the review

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SouthernBelle

One Horse Town, AL



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