Betrayal

Betrayal

A Poem by SouthernBelle

B***h.

W***e.

You slammed the door.

C**t.

S**t.

You started to cut.

Ugly.

Fat.

It was the cat.

Pathetic.

Lame.

To them it was a game.

Freak.

Strange.

You wanted to change.

Lier.

Fool.

You were uncool.

Idiot.

Stupid.

You don't know what you did.

Beautiful.

Amazing.

They said at your burying.

© 2013 SouthernBelle


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Powerful and sad use of words. Words can break a heart and change a life. A sad ending to the poem. I wonder do people who use negative words and thoughts. Do they feel bad? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Open the door to discussion and question.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SouthernBelle

6 Years Ago

thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.:)



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Nice write. No wasted words well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SouthernBelle

6 Years Ago

thank you i'm glad you enjoyed it
Very sad, very deep but it was beautiful

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SouthernBelle

6 Years Ago

thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.:)
BubblingMe

6 Years Ago

Your welcome :-)
Powerful and sad use of words. Words can break a heart and change a life. A sad ending to the poem. I wonder do people who use negative words and thoughts. Do they feel bad? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Open the door to discussion and question.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SouthernBelle

6 Years Ago

thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.:)

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SouthernBelle
SouthernBelle

One Horse Town, AL



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