The Difference Between Girls and Guys

The Difference Between Girls and Guys

A Poem by SouthernBelle

She-

Is laying in bed with the door locked.

the curtains are drawn and the light's off.

the Notebook is in the DVD player.

there's an empty tub of ice cream is on the floor.

next to a dozens of crumpled tissues.

she's got her music blasting,

no one can hear her sobs.

her fingertips are smudged with black,

wiping away mascara-stained tears.

she's replaying their last conversation,

thinking I'll never get him back...

 

He-

is sitting on the edge of his bed with the door locked.

the curtains are drawn and the light's off.

Call of Duty is in the xBox.

the controller is laying on the floor,

right beneath the spot where he nearly,

punched the wall in his own frustration.

he's got the music blasting so loud,

that nobody hears his cries.

his hair is a mess from running his hands thorugh it.

and he's replaying their last conversation,

thinking she'll never take me back...

© 2014 SouthernBelle


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The lack of communication and the pain communicated well here.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SouthernBelle

6 Years Ago

thanks im glad you liked it
a good interpretation.....
well composed

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SouthernBelle

6 Years Ago

thanks im glad you liked it
Two true description of disappointed people. Men and woman can mourn in different ways. The heart need time to know sadness before trying again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indeed it is an ever widening gap, well done, good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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SouthernBelle
SouthernBelle

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