I Can't Take It

I Can't Take It

A Poem by Jan
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Gone through something today and really need to get it off my chest.

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So misunderstood, so unappreciated

I feel so unloved, I’m always talked down upon

I cry weak tears, why can’t they stop?!

I’m a spoiled brat, I’m useless, I don’t bring anything but trouble

What’s the point?

Why do I bother?

If I say one word, I’ll be yelled upon and scoffed more at

They say they love me, hah, what a lie

If they really loved me, they wouldn’t make me feel this way

I don’t do things I’m supposed to, I give an attitude, and I complain about things; That’s all you see

But, really, I’m like this for reasons

I don’t do things because I know you’ll be there for me to do it

I give an attitude because you give me one first

I complain because I’m human, we all complain!

Sometimes, I just want to get away and be alone for a while but, if I try you ruin it

You take me back with hurtful words that I will always remember

Thanks for hurting me and adding more pain...

© 2013 Jan


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You cant say you are unloved. Cause you have a lot of people that love you. To name a few *clears throat* Kadessa, Gina, Kaylin,Jasmine, Jeffery, Alexis, Jared, Nick, Savanna, Cassandra, Devon, Assyana, Torene, Brian, Rebecca, Vivianna, Bella, Ashley, AJ, and plenty others. Oh and more importantly ME!! Your Giraffe HEARTS YOU SOOOO MUCH!!! Like every time you go on the ledge I grab your legs so that you don't fall because I cant stand even the THOUGHT of losing you. There are tons more that love you too. that was just to name a few

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jan

11 Years Ago

Man, forget Jeffery I hate that guy! He's annoying and rude!
But I see your point
Megan B.

11 Years Ago

You may not like him but GOD DOES HE LIKE YOU! and im glad you see my point
Gina

11 Years Ago

Damn if that's a few I would hate to see alot
I loved it. This truly sums up human nature.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jan

11 Years Ago

Thanks!

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Added on March 2, 2013
Last Updated on March 2, 2013
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Jan
Jan

Dream Land, Juniperlederp, CA



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