What you are to Me

What you are to Me

A Poem by L4rn13
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Any chance I get...I'll hold you close...

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Up the firefly path
You lead me full of promise
My warm heart you have,
We will fly honest.
Surrounded by bug-like stars
You're kindness worth more than gold
Who would have thought this would be ours?
Its your eyes for they have me sold.
You are like my haven
We could stay like this forever
All you are I can't stop craving,
And yet I know however.
Forever is a very long time
So lets savor,
This starry mist sublime.
No words will press through my lips
To tell the emotions within
Into your soul my mind dips
Pray tell is it a sin?
For I shan't avert my gaze
Your masculinity completes me
Shrouded in this twinkling haze,
My heart beats for you...you see...

© 2013 L4rn13


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bug-like stars

I'd like to see that. Haha. :) Sweet and sincere poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This a very nice poem:-) love is beautiful when its true. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like how it somehow calmed me. Pretty one. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hm, I feel that in order to fully appreciate this poem I'd have to hear you read it, or speak it, like in your about section: "rhythmful beats." Have you checked out the beat poet generation? I think you'd like them.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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L4rn13

10 Years Ago

Yes the enjoyment is particularly through reading out loud :)
I shall be sure to look them up .. read more
Two hearts can make a whole. Nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


L4rn13

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading ^-^

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Added on October 7, 2013
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Tags: experiment, explore, romantic, emotions, someone

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L4rn13
L4rn13

Birmingham, United Kingdom



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Poem from a Poet... I shan't befuddle your mind With poems of vampires Or quadruple signs, But rather rhythmful beats. For I am a poet And express through torn seams The stories of the heart,.. more..

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