Pass The Ketchup Please !!!

Tongue-in-cheek little diatribe...You just can't take those past dissapointments too seriously or they'll eat you alive....

 

You thought I was done

Like those crunchy pork chops you left on the grill

Begging still

For more of your bad attitude

Damn you were rude

F*****g screwed

Up

Ha

Belatedly you realized

Before you died

I wasn’t your piece of meat

And really not all that sweet

Anymore

For that soul you stole

Bit

You

Back

So you shouldn’t have

Bit

Me

Or at least

Waited until

I was really done

Before that splash

Of stinging

Tabasco

Pushed me

Over

The

Edge

Of my formerly

Well tamed

Tolerance

Of your incessant

Rants

Now

Pass

The

Ketchup

Please !!!

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

I needed a good laugh after my day in hell. I found this humorous and right on the mark. Your still is always a wonderful pleasure to dive into. You leave me feeling fulfilled and happy after read your perfect words. It is always a pleasurable experience to dwell in your word of words.


Great Job!!!!!

[Danielle Asher]

Love it! I just love the whole feel and style of it. And what a great ending.

[Christina2]

Absolutely raw - I ADORE THIS PIECE!!! I am adding it to read it again and again... what a write!!! fantastic.

[Angelic Darkness]

I loved the flow of this, and the comical life you brought
to ketchup. AD

This is actually funny. I liked what you had to say. Great poem!

[Angel's Lady]

Oh! I love this! What a really great write! Terrific job! I love it and it is going in my Favorites! Damn! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS! hahaha It definitely made me feel feisty while making me laugh at the same time! LOVE IT!