Benchmarks Sparks Fly

 

Benchmarks

Sparks fly

Vampires take to the sky

Undone by the undoing of desolation

Hesitation wandering alone in the streets

Frustration seeks to speak

Aloud

Proud

Of its bastion of pretense

Recompense

No more to be had

How sad

Tearstained

Cheeks

Tainted with jealous

Indignation

Absolution

Revolution

Seeks

Heat

But finds instead

Calamity

Insanity

Under the seats

Just

Another

Repeat

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

Truly an enjoy word waltz. The dancing of words and lines causing such deep images to appear with in my mind's eye both clearly and vividly. I saw a scene of a dark creature trying to allure a victim with sweet words and charm. The depth of far this caused my imagination to dwell was perfect and completely wonderful.


Great Job!!!!!!

[Clockwork]

I really liked it. I love your rhyme, it is very well placed. The short lines really fit the subject I think. The cycle is cold, and it does not allow for change. Well done as always.

[Angel's Lady]

Tainted with jealous
Indignation -- I love this line! Totally wicked cool!

Calamity
Insanity
Under the seats -- I love your word choices!

Great write here! Good job!