Supersonic Monster

Supersonic Monster

A Poem by SpeakToMeTheTruth

I, I've fallen in love
I couldn't get enough
They, took you away
Now, I am betrayed.
We said our goodbyes
I missed you last night
Please, come back to me
I'm not what I could be
Please, leave me alone
I never meant to hurt anyone
Don't let it escape
Supersonic monster inside of me.
You never loved me
Our dreams fell apart
The house was tore down
The babies cries all drowned
So if it's just tonight
The animal inside
Let it live and die
Against the end of times
Like everything inside
This is our last chance
Our hearts have not yet died
My heart is breaking
And then It's racing
I used to be fading
I loved you at the speed of light
I'm never gonna die
At least not tonight...

© 2014 SpeakToMeTheTruth

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I found this somewhat confusing. The lack of punctuation makes this a little hard to follow. Not sure where to stop and start.
A sad tale,asks her to come back and immediately says leave me alone.
A conflict.
Think this has good potential.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I love the concept of the supersonic monster inside. I honestly could see this as a song and I would love to see it's evolution!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

heh, check out some more of my stuff, they're all like that.
Chris Micha

8 Years Ago

Will do :)

8 Years Ago

:) U too Christian

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Added on May 21, 2014
Last Updated on May 21, 2014



Heraklion, Greece

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