Confinement

Confinement

A Story by LKBillips
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Horror Contest Entry

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My swollen eyes open in slits to more darkness.  Confusion sets in as my weak arms fumble outward into emptiness.
Panic starts to rise as I feel the wooden planks of my confinement, and slam my body outward in all directions.
My guts twist in despair as two familiar piercing eyes appear from a slot carved above.  The greedily devouring eyes savor the distress I emote, as I realize I'm never going home.
LK Billips- 3-8-17

© 2017 LKBillips


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Best short horror work so far.

Posted 7 Years Ago


LKBillips

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
This is pretty darn good, and reminded me of Poe. Besides that, you write very well and I find no errors. Here's hoping you did/will do outstanding in the contest.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LKBillips

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the kinds words! I was trying something out of my wheelhouse and hope that I can.. read more
Samuel Dickens

7 Years Ago

It's a great opening for a longer work, methinks.

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Added on March 8, 2017
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