Lost & Alone

Lost & Alone

A Poem by Nightmare Catcher
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All alone in the deep dark woods.

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Lost, alone, on this eerie night,
Scared, lonely, not a ray of light.
The moon has vanished into thin air,
There is no sun, now say your prayers.

I'd wish upon a star if I knew I could,
But I cannot see the sky in this deep dark wood.
Nor can I see where my feet land on the ground,
But I can feel the prickle of thorns all around.

I hear the howl of a wolf that seems close by,
The screams from inside me as I slowly die.
I can feel cold gush of wind on my cheek,
I shudder from the shock of freezing water below my feet.

© 2013 Nightmare Catcher


Author's Note

Nightmare Catcher
My first try *soft sob*. Please enjoy and please don't be to harsh on feedback.

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Good job! Very sinister and chilling. I think this is well written too.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A wonderful write indeed! Especially for a first try. Gothic horror, chilling and excellent imagery. Certainly made me shiver! Well done. Thank you for submitting this to my contest! ~ Helena :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think this happened to me one time.

it sounds quite familiar. almost as if i dreamed this poem or something.
its very well written my friend.
keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love the sounds and emotions painted in this piece. It is stunning thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Fantastic poem, emotional and deep.
It is a known fact that I can't stand miserable poetry, I am on a one woman crusade to cheer everyone up, so cheer up!!! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on April 1, 2013
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Tags: alone, dark, darkness, woods, night, moon, pray, wish

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Nightmare Catcher
Nightmare Catcher

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13 Love writing and drawing I'm not a writer for love stories and happy ever after. Most of my writing will be depressing (and most will also relate to my life in a way). Nothing pretty by me.... more..

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