Giving up

Giving up

A Poem by Labu

I scream for help
I cry for mercy
Darkness is all I see
No answer to end my misery

I've made my decision
I will become my own savior
I cant wait any longer
For all I have is me

This world has nothing left for me
Nor anything I can offer 
With a smile on my face
I slit my wrist

My own choice
My own decision
I have no fear
I have no regret
 
Heart started to race
Vision fading away
Hands feeling numb
Blood fills the floor

Release me from this pain
Let my soul free
To all things I used to care
I bid farewell with my last breath
 

© 2011 Labu


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There is something seriously wrong with our culture when any one of us feels there is nothing here for them...writing such as this motivates me to take action, to try to get others involved, to unite and work towards change. It is urgent to change the way we live, there should be a place and a purpose for all of us.
I wish you well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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There is something seriously wrong with our culture when any one of us feels there is nothing here for them...writing such as this motivates me to take action, to try to get others involved, to unite and work towards change. It is urgent to change the way we live, there should be a place and a purpose for all of us.
I wish you well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Labu
Labu

Puchong, Selangor, Malaysia



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