To the end of the world

To the end of the world

A Poem by Labu

A sea of glittering sand at the end of the pale blue earth
From the sky that fell into twilight,memories start to overflow
Will they gradually pile up like rubble? 

There are chanced and destined lives, misunderstood feelings
Words that are spun together,those who hurt one another
Even so,will the path we walk
Continue toward tomorrow?

That's why across the world,we'll spread dreams of living
To the eye of the mind,conceal them within our hearts
Until we arrive at the promised land that lies ahead

We gazed at the map we drew with our fingertips
Of a world which spread to the other side
Will those reflected tears flow like an illusion?

A past that became intertwined and a future I want to deliver
Hearts that tremble together, those who can forgive one another
Will those troubled and lonely days where we couldn't face each other continue?

Someday, will you hear my heart?
Will it resonate in your heart?
Because always, the feelings that we believe in
Make us strong...without stopping...

We'll send the present to another world
Battling voices call to mind,you are not alone
As long as we cross to the new land

That's why
Around the world, our living heartbeats
To the end of the world,they will resound in the wind
Until we arrive
At the promised land that lies ahead

© 2011 Labu


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That's why
Around the world, our living heartbeats
To the end of the world,they will resound in the wind
Until we arrive
At the promised land that lies ahead............beautifully inspirational piece. I wouldn't change anything except perhaps the last line in the 5th stanza.........trouble or troubled? Excellent work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful words...I've heard of this promised land and have decided we will have to create it for ourselves.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words are so beautiful. Awesome poem. I enjoyed this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh thanks for pointing out that :) fixed

Posted 8 Years Ago


That's why
Around the world, our living heartbeats
To the end of the world,they will resound in the wind
Until we arrive
At the promised land that lies ahead............beautifully inspirational piece. I wouldn't change anything except perhaps the last line in the 5th stanza.........trouble or troubled? Excellent work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such lovliness here, I enjoyed most inspiring words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Labu
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Puchong, Selangor, Malaysia



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