Eyes

Eyes

A Poem by Lady Celery

I remember the last night we laid under the stars,
And the day everything fell apart.
I could see it in your eyes.

They were so sad and terrified, I couldn't believe they were yours.
It was like something inside you died, or someone closed the doors
In your mind. 
Sad and terrified,
You had hoped for something more,
But instead you said goodbye.

© 2014 Lady Celery


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A lot said in the short poetry. No goodbye is a good one. I agree with the logic of the poetry. The eyes tell us the story before the ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
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Lady Celery
Lady Celery

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