100 words about roaches.

100 words about roaches.

A Story by Lady Celery
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A 100-word story about... something bad.

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My first reaction was to scream and run away. It seemed so natural, I couldn’t help myself. Unfortunately, that wasn’t going to solve the problem.

“Honey, there’s a cockroach in the house,” I announced loudly. That day, though, he was out playing pool with his friends. 

Well, now the only thing left to do is panic and make a bad decision.

I ran into the kitchen and grabbed my broom. I charged back into the living room, where the roach was waiting. 

I swung at it and missed. Then, I stepped forward.

Now it’s on the bottom of my shoe. 

© 2010 Lady Celery


Author's Note

Lady Celery
I don't like cockroaches.

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I like the poem and I agree. The cockroaches breed and take over very quickly. Make us know fear and bad possibilities. A good ending to the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


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hahahahaha....very good. Maybe change the title to "Roach Bomb"

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's the cutest story I have ever read, the best LOL, you really really hurt cockroaches, it's obvious XD

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was the cutest thing I've read in a while! I especially loved the line, "Well, now the only thing left to do is panic and make a bad decision." Very funny! It's definitely not easy to create a story in such few words, but you managed to do so very well. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


hahaha good job jules. you'd hate my apartment...great short story though.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I pretty much do the exact same thing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sounds like my girlfriend, who screams, cries, and laughs simultaneously while shouting for me to "kill it! Kill it!" But I never do, I always let it go outside,

Posted 10 Years Ago


This made me laugh. This is excellent. No one like cockroaches. A great story with so few words.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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