Love is Blind

Love is Blind

A Poem by Violet's Run
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In a land of glittering white with crystals shining out In a place where the snow is king and queen A dreamy recounting of a dead end

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 In the land of far away there dwelt a maiden fair
She was a timid child and had no power
To prevent the changing of the ways
Through dark and light she put up a fight
To prevent the lie that lived
In fields dark and lonely trimmed
The last full days of summer fled in ripening repose
Down the starry island with blossoms shining
Down beside the rivers that were running
Into the sleepless parts of yesterday
Into the dreams that  had all gone away
She fought the fight of the ugly kind
Knowing full well the ending
But that is why they say,  Love is blind

© 2014 Violet's Run


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Violet's Run
what do you think about the dreaminess?

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you accomplish a dream like state right away ... but you are saying something more here that i can not discern ... read it twice fast and slow .... but still my sense is that there is more here ... have to come back again ... in a fresh state of mind ... i want to know more of the changing of the ways ... and why is she fighting through light and dark .. and the fight of the ugly kind is out of my ken at the moment ..
dreaminess..yes ..mythological ..yes ... pulls nature in ..yes ... i enjoy all of those things about your poem ..
must come back to read again ..
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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you accomplish a dream like state right away ... but you are saying something more here that i can not discern ... read it twice fast and slow .... but still my sense is that there is more here ... have to come back again ... in a fresh state of mind ... i want to know more of the changing of the ways ... and why is she fighting through light and dark .. and the fight of the ugly kind is out of my ken at the moment ..
dreaminess..yes ..mythological ..yes ... pulls nature in ..yes ... i enjoy all of those things about your poem ..
must come back to read again ..
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 5, 2014
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Tags: love, frailty, beginning, ending, death, birth, mystic, perception, altercation, remote, agency

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Violet's Run
Violet's Run

san joaquin valley, CA



About
My grandmother was Violet. I share her name I am Susan Violet.. But she was the strongest most beautiful woman I have met. For some reason when I started writing again I had this image of her telling .. more..

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