One Perspective

One Perspective

A Poem by Violet's Run
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vocabulary, jaded, sad, tired, honesty, real deal, poet, poetess, writer, blahs, tongue in cheek,

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Languid
A word that conjures up a hot southern afternoon
spent with a belly full of fried chicken and a julep
It is a rich word voluptuous and yet repulsive in implication of 
overindulgence
Carrying along the fragrance of jasmine and the growls of a panther sitting in a tree
While the reader chews on a drumstick and opens their top button..
It is the kind of word writers love to use and to spin off
In mindless trivial ways to bedazzle and add flavor
To do the poetic version of the two step and
will leave the poor soul still starving and empty
The writer that is honest and open
Writing with truth and veracity
Baring their intent in raw and non flowery language
Be it an explosion of inspiration from the Gods it will
Come under the critical and jaundiced eye of sour grapes
For is not inspiration from angels or Gods as worthy of praise
As the labored and chiseled work of prose that echoes with pedigree
Yes I have said it 
I will say it again
I have no fear of a bigger authority or power
I have no fear of the Poetess Goddess of War
I am just standing up for all the writers out there 
Just trying to get by and write
It is hard enough some days to drag yourself back here 
And put yourself back on page
After being ignored or slighted by commercial enthusiasm and 
self seeking hot air blusterers self important to an extreme
I say,
 Over reacting and ill inclined
you might say...
I think,  I will just not say anymore.

© 2014 Violet's Run


Author's Note

Violet's Run
all comments welcome

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tho i am here only to express and grow and improve ..i am sure you have spoken up for many many writers of all kinds ... i was settling in to the lull of languidity you painted then knee jerked at the turn ... i took this to mean trying to get published but on second reading realize it might not be you meaning
"After being ignored or slighted by commercial enthusiasm and " but either way i hope you feel a bit better .. the honesty is refreshing .. nice job!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Violet's Run

9 Years Ago

actually this is about me and a bit of personal commenting on a situation in the past ... I think th.. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

yep! for sure .. the second reading told me it wasn't about being published per say .. i agree .. th.. read more



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tho i am here only to express and grow and improve ..i am sure you have spoken up for many many writers of all kinds ... i was settling in to the lull of languidity you painted then knee jerked at the turn ... i took this to mean trying to get published but on second reading realize it might not be you meaning
"After being ignored or slighted by commercial enthusiasm and " but either way i hope you feel a bit better .. the honesty is refreshing .. nice job!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Violet's Run

9 Years Ago

actually this is about me and a bit of personal commenting on a situation in the past ... I think th.. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

yep! for sure .. the second reading told me it wasn't about being published per say .. i agree .. th.. read more

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Added on March 31, 2014
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Tags: vocabulary, jaded, tired, sad honesty, read deal, poet, poetess, writer, blahs, tongue in cheek.

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Violet's Run
Violet's Run

san joaquin valley, CA



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My grandmother was Violet. I share her name I am Susan Violet.. But she was the strongest most beautiful woman I have met. For some reason when I started writing again I had this image of her telling .. more..

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