Tears

Tears

A Poem by Dark and Mysterious
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Salty water slips down when no bruise outside 'cause the real bruise lies deep inside...

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Pain inflicted
Beaten down
Tattered and broken
Never made a sound
Abused, cheated
Bruised and tortured
But still strong
Never showed any feeling
Braved it all
But a few harsh words
Scarred her heart
A tear escaped
She felt pain
It was her secret
For only her to know
'Cause the world didn't know
That she had a heart...

© 2014 Dark and Mysterious


Author's Note

Dark and Mysterious
I originally wrote this as a one liner (description) but then I added the lines... Tell me what you think.

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Short yet poignant.

I believe this poem could describe a vast majority of people. There are many forms of abuse, too many victims to count in this world. Every day sees that list grow larger and larger.

We all have hearts. Sometimes though we are forced to cut them out and put them somewhere free of pain. Unfortunately, if we leave them there too long, it ends with us being the ones to inflict familiar pains on the new batch of victims.

Quite thought provoking.

-Caradoc

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful and amazing, I love it.
Great work!
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dark and Mysterious

11 Years Ago

ty :)
Great job! I really like it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dark and Mysterious

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
i love it! Really, its awesome!! The feel is amazing, well portrayed emotions...
Relatable, and perfectly painted

Gotta shelve it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dark and Mysterious

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)

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Added on August 24, 2012
Last Updated on March 15, 2014

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Dark and Mysterious

Delhi, India



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