Gray Eyes~

Gray Eyes~

A Poem by ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞

Its bout a Boy its not really spose to ryme


Your Rare smile makes my day light up,

i find myself traped in your arms,

warm, light falls on your face,

i know ive found my place.

and its with you~




© 2010 ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞

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sweet write..
it is to the point..
nice job done:)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very touching and sweet (:

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is so sweet. It's short but so touching. The ring is a very nice touch. Good job. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago

Beautiful write. Good poems don't have to rhyme. This piece has a calm and even flow to it that just melts the reader.

Posted 10 Years Ago

nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago

love it

Posted 10 Years Ago

very nice. i loved it

Posted 10 Years Ago

LOve it!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Short, simple and to the point. Good work

Posted 10 Years Ago

The poem is short. Sweet and to the point. A outstanding poem. Thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on June 9, 2010
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~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞

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