Gray Eyes~

Gray Eyes~

A Poem by ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
"

Its bout a Boy its not really spose to ryme

"

Your Rare smile makes my day light up,

i find myself traped in your arms,

warm, light falls on your face,

i know ive found my place.

and its with you~

 

 

 

© 2010 ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞


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sweet write..
it is to the point..
nice job done:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very touching and sweet (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so sweet. It's short but so touching. The ring is a very nice touch. Good job. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful write. Good poems don't have to rhyme. This piece has a calm and even flow to it that just melts the reader.

Posted 10 Years Ago


nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


love it

Posted 10 Years Ago


very nice. i loved it

Posted 10 Years Ago


LOve it!


Posted 10 Years Ago


Short, simple and to the point. Good work

Posted 10 Years Ago


The poem is short. Sweet and to the point. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago



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~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞

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