Tears

Tears

A Poem by ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞

I let my Tears roll of my cheek and hit the floor,
Thinking of the one i adore,
he left me behind to fend for myself,
and now i cant seem to find my place agian

© 2010 ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞


Author's Note

~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
its alittle short ^^" tell me what you think plz

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Short but very good. I like it, great job!!!

Heather

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short and to the point, but to an extent that's what crowds it in beauty.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


omg it is so good but short sis

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short but a good piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's short, but it says a lot... :)
I like this ^^ :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like really like this poem. Says a lot in a few words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sad, wish it could've been longer. Nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



urm...it was okay...addition of one or two sentence would made it much more sad....Anyway, keep writing...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Tears take away the pain of disappointment...
Wisdom learns the lesson...
Patience make us wait for the one who will not leave you behind...will love everything you are...
and feel blessed..


Posted 13 Years Ago


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I liked it, wish the last line rhymed think it would have come across stronger...nice poem though

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 28, 2010
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~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
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SYMMETRY LAND!!!, were symmetry is :3, Japan



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