Tears

I let my Tears roll of my cheek and hit the floor,
Thinking of the one i adore,
he left me behind to fend for myself,
and now i cant seem to find my place agian

Author's Note

its alittle short ^^" tell me what you think plz

Reviews

[Caitlynxoxo]

short but sweet ;) i loved this, especially since in so few lines you told a satisfying story, which i generally find hard to do. But yours is smooth and fluid, so great job, and thanks for sharing !!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Coyote Poetry]

A short poem but you told a complete story. Easy to get lost when you are sad. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

Hanks Onesama!!!! ^^ ur a good writer urself!!!

[nono]

Something everyone feels so much detail and story in something so short nicely done this is good, but it's also something that you can add to haha. Nice you made your point and that's important when you write

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

oh yeah ur right!!!!! lol my bad ^^ thanks btw

[Mauricio Montoya]

The first line: of my cheek, should be, off my cheek. Nice work.