Pulled away

Pulled away

A Poem by ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
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maybe a little short

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I was pulled away from all that i loved,
clinging to the floor while trying not to be draged away.
i cried an endless river of tears,
knowing i'll never see or hold them agian.

© 2010 ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞


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~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
hope you like it

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very short..but i liked it..
i enjoyed reading it:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nicely done :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


"draged" should actually be dragged

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good write. could be expanded, maybe.

Posted 9 Years Ago


nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice pic.
i liked it alot

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short and sweet!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A very strong poem. No wasted words. To be separated from friend can make us want to cling to things that will be missed. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is short but so beautiful love it

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like "endless river of tears" The metaphor is beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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