Pulled away

Pulled away

A Poem by ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞

maybe a little short


I was pulled away from all that i loved,
clinging to the floor while trying not to be draged away.
i cried an endless river of tears,
knowing i'll never see or hold them agian.

© 2010 ~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞

Author's Note

~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
hope you like it

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very short..but i liked it..
i enjoyed reading it:)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Nicely done :D

Posted 9 Years Ago

"draged" should actually be dragged

Posted 9 Years Ago

Good write. could be expanded, maybe.

Posted 9 Years Ago

nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago

nice pic.
i liked it alot

Posted 9 Years Ago

Short and sweet!

Posted 9 Years Ago

A very strong poem. No wasted words. To be separated from friend can make us want to cling to things that will be missed. A outstanding poem. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago

this is short but so beautiful love it

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like "endless river of tears" The metaphor is beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on August 29, 2010
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~Death The Kid~ ☜♥☞
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