Love's Graveyard

Love's Graveyard

A Poem by Whiskurz

I wonder if there's a graveyard
For the love that didn't last
A place to bury our hopes and dreams
A tomb of forgotten past
A place where broken promises lay
After they become a lie
A place to bury relationships
After they give up and die
A place we can bury tomorrows
To put the future in its grave
A place to bury our wasted kisses
And all the trust we gave
A place to bury our commitment
That we gave away in vain
A place to bury our heartaches
That caused us so much pain
A place we can bury betrayal
That we too often denied
A place to bury the broken smiles
And the river of tears we've cried
A place to bury all these things
That I've been speaking of
A place to bury our dead desires
A graveyard of broken love

© 2012 Whiskurz


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great write very expressive and lots of imagery here as well

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sad write, so well expressed. Very poetic as well

Posted 11 Years Ago


'I wonder if there's a graveyard
For the love that didn't last
A place to bury our hopes and dreams
A tomb of forgotten past..'

Very much enjoyed this poem. I could've used this many years ago, back in my day.. ;)
Loved the topic; enjoyed the rhythm. Thank you for sharing your work~ pat


Posted 11 Years Ago


You are a master. This means so much to me, right now. Not a memorable review, but a heartfelt one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thanks again my friend......Whisk
Shimmerbliss/CAF

11 Years Ago

This was such a welcome read. A favorite.

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