Why

Why

A Poem by One Lost Anti-Hero
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Never have I felt such a deep pain in my chest from just a character. This is a work of fiction, but the pain is still there. Chelsea you will be missed deeply. Source Akame ga kill.

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Tell me what to do when I feel like this.

Push me around so I can move again.

Force me to follow you because I can't on my own.

Don't leave me.


Why did you have to be the Heroine that I loved?

Why did you have to be so loving and care so much?

Why did you have to be so brave and courageous?

Just don't leave me alone.


I want you to eat my food one more time because I love it when you do.

I make you laugh at my stupidity one more time because I love your smile.

I need you here to tease me one more time because I love myself cause of you.

I'm sorry, just don't leave me alone.


I don't want to forget you like a passing dream.

I won't lose you like time that I've wasted.

I can't let you leave me like everyone I loved has.

I'm sorry Chelsea, just why did I leave you alone?


I know that your staying safe like you always do.

I hope that your eating your fill like you always do.

I pray that your fighting like you always do.

You've never left, saved me again like you always do.

© 2015 One Lost Anti-Hero


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Very heartfelt and beautiful. I do see potential as well. I look forward to seeing and reading more of your art. Continue your passion no matter what anybody says. :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "I don't want to forget you like a passing dream.
I won't lose you like time that I've wasted.
I can't let you leave me like everyone I loved has.
I'm sorry Chelsea, just why did I leave you alone?"
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia


Posted 8 Years Ago


One Lost Anti-Hero

8 Years Ago

Alright thank you for reading it and giving me your opinion. Ill check out your story.
Wow, this is heartbreaking and full of emotion. A good read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


One Lost Anti-Hero

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is a lovely poem, it made me think about things.

Posted 8 Years Ago


One Lost Anti-Hero

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad that it did.
Very sweet sentiments and nice dedication to your 'heroine'. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


One Lost Anti-Hero

8 Years Ago

She was unique in concept and beautiful with her strength, but she's gone like a past memory. Howeve.. read more
This is really sweet and heart felt with a sense of emergency . :) I enjoyed every word. It is dramatic and beautiful — good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


One Lost Anti-Hero

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I followed the 5 stages of grief to give this sense of struggle and played the 5 emotions.. read more
Seems like you're searching for a great heroine throughout this poem...very interesting to read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


One Lost Anti-Hero

8 Years Ago

Nope if your talking about relationship wise I am not looking for a heroine, but more of respecting .. read more
The message is compelling and touching. Love is hard to control. Thanks for the beautiful message man.

Posted 8 Years Ago


One Lost Anti-Hero

8 Years Ago

No problem I still edited it a bit because well this was important.
Peach

8 Years Ago

It's amazing...
One Lost Anti-Hero

8 Years Ago

Thank you, but Tetsuya Tashiro and Takahiro should be the ones with all the credit. They created(and.. read more

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