Winter Orchestra

Winter Orchestra

A Poem by LastSkywalker
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Something i had to whip up in 5 minutes or less.

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The stars are a silent symphony,

flowing notes flutter down on the snow.

Hear the songs play beautifully,

twisting and twirling moving and growing.

A stellar performance met with lunar applause,

the strings and brass leave the ice in awe.

Percussion and wind grips with melodic claws,

A great crescendo without a single flaw.

The curtain calls as the sun awakes,

the music retreats to crystal flakes.

A whole new style of music begins,

percussion brass strings and winds.

© 2020 LastSkywalker


Author's Note

LastSkywalker
First day of high school our English teacher gave us 5 minutes to write an acceptable poem that did not require any specific format. So.. yeah here.

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This is such a harmonic poem. The notes falling silent as the sun rises, and then to return when it sets the following night. Beautifully written! Thank you for sharing this

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes, forced exercises can produce unexpected results. Serendipitous, even.
Lovely flow to it all, and a perfect decrescendo of an ending

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LastSkywalker

3 Years Ago

It really is. Like I said I had 5 minutes so I'm pretty proud of this one. I got an A+ ... this was .. read more
Wow.....what a poem. I am in awe.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LastSkywalker

3 Years Ago

Oh wow... thank you!
light and ashes

3 Years Ago

You are very welcome! This work deserves high praise! :)
You're offering some impressive poems for a new member. I like the metaphoric comparisons in this very much. I'm sure your teacher was happy with what you handed in. Good job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LastSkywalker

3 Years Ago

Well thank you. What I have that I'm potting up have been in the works since I was 14 and 20 and now.. read more
Relic

3 Years Ago

I wish you luck.
LastSkywalker

3 Years Ago

Thank you. And you as well.

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Added on August 21, 2020
Last Updated on August 21, 2020
Tags: winter, music, fantasy, snow

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LastSkywalker
LastSkywalker

Derry, NH



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There isn't anything special about me that is worth typing out on a website bio what I can say this. I used to write all the time every day random poems anything I thought of... and then life happened.. more..

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