Time... Tick..Tick..Tick

When you lose someone- time drags on

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Time ticks by so slowly

I'm waiting for you return

So you can hold me in your arms

 

The minutes feel like hours

Time is lingering

The tick...tick...tick..

Is stuck in my head

 

I miss you terribly

I need you here beside me

The days are passing s slowly

I haven't seen or heard from you

 

Are you OK?

 

Where are you?

 

I can't breath

My lungs are being squeezed

My heart beat doesn't beat

As fast as it used to

 

I think of you

 

The clock is ticking

 

It is ringing in my brain

Faster and faster

My head is spinning

 

You disappeared

You never came back

 

I can't move

Time

 

Is

 

Going

By

 

So

Slowy

 

Please- Come back to me

 

 

Reviews

[time to face facts]

well, written. it kept my attention and that's usually hard to do. :D

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Don't we all know this feeling..well written

[My Fair Lady]

I like this Laura. Your first pubished piece. You should be excited about your accomplishments as a young writer. I am looking forward to seeing more from you. Keep writing sister friend writer.