Here, Now and Forever

Here, Now and Forever

A Poem by Chipgirl

I feel you inside me

Slowly changing me

The way I feel,


Nothing is the same since you touched me

Do you feel it to?

I ask myself.

Do you feel the burning?  

When we are close together?

Do your insides melt when we kiss?

My head is spinning,

With these thoughts

You’re changing me.

It scares me.

But the look you have in your eyes

When we gaze deep into each others eyes

I know that you love me too.

And somehow,

Against all the odds that we meant to be together.


Now and


© 2010 Chipgirl

Author's Note

Not really sure if this works.... But i just really need to get back into writing. I hope this is ok. plz comment :)

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A nice poem.
I like the lines:
Against all odds that we meant to be together.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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I love this one
Nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago

This one's a genuine, straightforward expression after being touched by love. The look in your eyes, the kiss that melts the inside all this is so real. The poem's sensual and passionate. Liked it. Good work. Great way to come back to writing LOL :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Wow, this was a really beautiful write. I really liked the directness of this piece, and thought that you evoked the passion and love involved in a relationship in a subtle yet convincing way. I thought that the pace and flow of this piece was effortless and effective, and that the placement of the last three lines made for a perfect ending. Nice work,

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Cool. Laura, you got something here. Because i love you and want you to be the best, i'd suggest you tweak the rhythm a little, make sure it all flows nicely.
I have to say, (you know my cheeky mind) this was full of innuendos - if you look at it that way... ;)
Anyway, great stuff! And I hope this isn't based on truth, or you've got some serious explaining to do!

Posted 12 Years Ago

It most certainly does work, its a stunning piece and really reflects the fact that every single person that we encounter changes us, I believe this to be true, but thats just my opinion. Nicely penned though, thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I really love this. Very very good.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I think you gave us an honest description of your experience and that always works. I like to see some more imagery but beyond that it is a nice read.

Posted 12 Years Ago

"Do you feel it to?" maybe there's supposedly a double o at the to...
I like it so much, this is actually the condition I'm in now...

Posted 12 Years Ago

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I think this is your best piece so conveys a great visual image and i love the idea of someone getting under your skin and changing your ways even if it's's exciting...well done

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on October 13, 2010
Last Updated on October 13, 2010



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