Key's Caress

Key's Caress

A Poem by Laura Kate

Your hands
the making of magic.
How I long for you to care for me
the way you care for your keys,
for you to flow life to me
through your veins
the way it glides
so abundantly
to your piano.

Oh how I long for you to 
caress me,
caress me like your keys. 

© 2019 Laura Kate


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A man who makes love to his piano keys. Plays his music in ecstasy. I see him well and wonder whether he would be capable of loving anything else in the same way. Great visuals here LauraKate. I am seeing a classical pianist in black coat and tails about to make sweet music, Not a woman in sight.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Chris, I love what you see in this.
Laura.



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JR
Wow, what a sense of longing. Great use of metaphor, the comparison between keys and the flow of music to the lover's touch. "How I long for you to care for me / the way you care for your keys," I think every single one of us has had someone like this in their life. Very well said, I like the emotion that brings up.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

Thank you JR for your kind review :)
A man who makes love to his piano keys. Plays his music in ecstasy. I see him well and wonder whether he would be capable of loving anything else in the same way. Great visuals here LauraKate. I am seeing a classical pianist in black coat and tails about to make sweet music, Not a woman in sight.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Chris, I love what you see in this.
Laura.
Very lovly poem and nice fancy words. I enjoyed t. It flowed well.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laura Kate

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jung Lee

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Added on October 8, 2019
Last Updated on October 8, 2019
Tags: pressure, prose, poetry, water, elements, fire, heat, passion, love, lust, music, guitar, romance, piano, keys

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Laura Kate
Laura Kate

United Kingdom



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