Mornings in Spring

Mornings in Spring

A Poem by Laurierose
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Beauty so blinding...

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Sun rose
 Beautiful petals
  Eyes wide
   I caught it
    And fell

© 2018 Laurierose


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Wonderful use of words. You made me believe and see. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

4 Months Ago

This completely made my day! I appreciate the sincerity.
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Poet.
Wow, beautiful images held within this short, sweet, endearing poem.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

7 Months Ago

I like to think of the slow, unraveling of a flower. Thank you for the touching review.
that kind of fall is never forgotten, the only kind that feels both good and bad. Beautiful lines, loved it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

7 Months Ago

One of the most exciting yet terrifying falls, indeed I agree. Thank you for the sincere review!
I wish it was spring already, this is very beautiful

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

7 Months Ago

It's one of the most scenic times of year. Thank you for the sincere review.
Jade

7 Months Ago

not a problem
I think you've done a good job with the wordplay here! With "rose" being both the flower and the past tense of "rise", and the ending with the catch and the fall.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

7 Months Ago

Ah! I see you've caught that, lol. Thank you!
This is startling to read becuz it doesn't end the way I thought it would. Perfect depiction of being lured into a trap disguised as a rosy scene! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

8 Months Ago

Yes, the falling can be scary...even in love if we're not careful. Thanks for the sincere review.
wish it was a morning in spring

That's the thing with roses > They dont last very long
Catch them when you can

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

9 Months Ago

Hold them close and commit the smell to memory. Thanks for the review!

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Laurierose
Laurierose

Durham, NC



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