Holiday Horror

Holiday Horror

A Poem by LawrenceRaybon
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A two sentence horror story.

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To each and all and every one
he raised his hat and then his gun,
boom and boom and boom again,
but to the last a wink and grin.

'Now no more naughty with their flaws,’
so said a jolly Santa Claus.

© 2016 LawrenceRaybon


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LawrenceRaybon
Did it effectively convey horror in two sentences? How could it be better?

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It was like the opening scene to that Bill Murray movie 'Scrooged' - I ddn't get horror - I did get a laugh though at the thought of the trigger happy Saint Nick.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LawrenceRaybon

4 Years Ago

I hadn't even thought of that! I love that movie. Though it did scare the crap out of me as a kid... read more

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Added on December 12, 2016
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LawrenceRaybon
LawrenceRaybon

Jackson, MS



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