Darkness Coming

A short poem I wrote for a Bleach fanfiction. Short and wistful.

And so the dawn falls abruptly

Never to be seen again

The cold so clear

Am I finally dead?

Alas, time has stopped its flow of music and magic

It’s keeping me here alive?

Why, as the sun finally sets under a balustrade of my own

I see the darkness coming, never to be untold

Author's Note

This is a poem I originally had Rangiku, but switched it with my OCs, 'cause this one was better.

Reviews

[sushobhan]

An excellent and rejoicing charm of poetry. Abated and very concise.....The two are abstruse to be devised......But you did consolidate on your ruminating cerebrum. Keep up your good penning..