Help..

Tick Tick Tock 

My mind is like a time bomb,

waiting to explode.

Tick Tick Tock

The thoughts build up,

my sight becomes blurry.

Tick Tick Tock

BOOM

I lie broken on the floor.

No movement to be seen.

Tears stream down to the floor.

Help..

Reviews

[Sherriff]

A sense of hopeless despair, a step to far towords the explosion inside. A very hearbreaking poem screaming help through your lines. I see the clock clearly in my mind your short sharp words hit close to home. A beautifully crafted tragically sad poem