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Downfall

Downfall

A Poem by LeahRhodes



Everytime I look up into your eyes

I see my desperate downfall and how


Ready I am to follow you

© 2015 LeahRhodes


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Beautiful, short and intense. Our biggest fear is being a willing participant in our own downfall, but as you say, someone comes along with those eyes and we begin the descent without knowing.
Wonderfully stated in so few words. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LeahRhodes

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your review. The challenge was to convey the complexity of this feeling in a.. read more
alifeacoustic

6 Years Ago

You're very welcome



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Short yet so powerfully written

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful, short and intense. Our biggest fear is being a willing participant in our own downfall, but as you say, someone comes along with those eyes and we begin the descent without knowing.
Wonderfully stated in so few words. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LeahRhodes

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your review. The challenge was to convey the complexity of this feeling in a.. read more
alifeacoustic

6 Years Ago

You're very welcome

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Added on September 6, 2015
Last Updated on September 6, 2015
Tags: romance, downfall, love, eyes, lovers

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